tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8637423620307521684.post736264803748060421..comments2023-07-01T02:51:08.664-07:00Comments on etcetera: Four Poems - Andy SpraggJoshua Joneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03465590492959460818noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8637423620307521684.post-45188761352545283292010-04-30T04:49:52.977-07:002010-04-30T04:49:52.977-07:00"For S" - very charming poem, enjoyed re..."For S" - very charming poem, enjoyed reading this immensely.Somehow exactly the right length for a love poem as well, conveys the emotion perfectly without any superfluous language.Desiree Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09301128063756511796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8637423620307521684.post-51797809410944619892010-04-18T09:08:14.475-07:002010-04-18T09:08:14.475-07:00Ah, these are really refreshing. 'Advice to th...Ah, these are really refreshing. 'Advice to the Writer." = genuinely funny. Nice to see a poet with a good sense of humour!sofeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11337249648379303743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8637423620307521684.post-56040241393259084382010-04-10T12:15:00.632-07:002010-04-10T12:15:00.632-07:00I really like these poems. I have this strange inf...I really like these poems. I have this strange infatuation with long lines, so sometimes I feel a bit claustrophobic here.<br /><br />"Go to Wanstead<br />you once had a dream<br />about going to ‘The George’<br />there. In fact you’ve never<br />been there – except by now<br />it’s likely you’ve been there.<br />There’s no way to be sure."<br /><br />Has a nice little James Tate flavor to it. Maybe I'm way off.W.F.https://www.blogger.com/profile/18354701327343219309noreply@blogger.com